Script Outline for The Escape
- Set-Up: Montage: Without getting too in-depth, this shows mediocre reporter Joe in the late stages of his research into the devilish machinations of the fiendish Dr. Nope. We see his work about to produce fruit--then he disappears. Meanwhile, Don is fired from the CIA; he wanders a few days, then happens upon Joe's now deserted ramshackle house. Intrigued, he researches a bit and learns Joe was after Dr. Nope--which fits nicely with his plans to regain favor with his bosses by researching exactly that criminal mastermind. Back to Joe: he now sits in Dr. Nope's ultra-secret, ultra-high-security prison; currently he's just being isolated, but there is a distinct hint of torture in the future. Don comes closer and closer to tracking down the secret prison.
- Inciting Incident: As the opening credits end, Don finds himself outside the prison--and Joe is just being taken in for torture. Don must act fast, and he does; somehow he manages to break Joe out just before the gruesome torture begins. But now that they're out, they have another problem: how to stay out. Dr. Nope isn't just going to let them escape like that--he'll send all his minions to bring them back. It is as some of his minions report the escape that we first meet Dr. Nope in person. He is angry.
- Rising Action: The majority of the movie is in here. Ironically, this is also the part with the least substance: merely a classic conglomeration of chase scenes, fight scenes, explosions, and other intense action. Any tentative attempt at substantive plot (or the development of any secondary characters) is quickly squashed by yet another attack by Nope minions which forces Don and Joe to go back on the defense or the run.
- Climax: This comes as late as possible in the script, to keep suspense artificially high. Our two intrepid heroes, after all their running, have managed to run themselves right into Dr. Nope's main lair (and they didn't sneak in either: they're completely surrounded by all the firepower Dr. Nope has left--despite all the overblown use of resources in the chase sequences, the remainder is still considerable). All seems lost, but of course we know it can't end like that. And indeed, surprise, surprise, they manage to survive once again! How do they do it?!
- Falling Action: As short as possible: Dr. Nope gives an extended soliloquy whose gist is that they don't understand his true genius, they can't stop him, and even though they survived this time, they'll never escape. By this time, after all that has happened, this sounds pretty weak. And indeed, as soon as Dr. Nope finishes, Joe and Don immediately escape...
- Resolution: Only to meet a final plot twist in the resolution. Because I don't want to spoil the ending, this will have to remain classified information. Suffice it for now to say that, as this is an epic action movie, it's absolutely final for one side of the conflict.
Oh Peter,
ReplyDeleteI laughed out loud while reading your outline. I love your sense of sarcasm and humor in this and I hope that you are able to use that in your script as well.
I hope that you do in fact have ideas on those areas that you've skated through in the outline such as sub-plots, minor characters and falling action.
Keep up the great work,
Ms. B
I like how you left the resolution as a mystery to keep us wondering and guessing at what happens.
ReplyDeleteI can see that this is basically all action and I feel like you haven't left any moments that are less action-packed and more calm for the main characters to develop and maybe grow closer in their relationship. In my opinion there should be a good balance between action and non-action, but of course it's fine if there is a little more action than not.
Good job! :)
The whole concept is interesting, but the beginning may need to be a little more detailed like maybe start out on a normal day and then something happens that makes the protagonists want to find your antagonist.
ReplyDeletethis is a great plot! it's very action-packed, yet clever as well. the only suggestion i have to give would be to make the beginning very clear that it starts out as two stories. then when they combine, the reader will have a better idea of the plot. great job!
ReplyDeleteI think your outline is great! The action paired onlong with your sarcasm was a great combination to make your story very funny yet keeping me on edge. My only suggestion is just a little bit more falling action so that we understand a sense of what is supposed to happen. Other than that I thought it was great!
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